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| Date | 28-Sep-2009 |
| Story | Bareback by His Response |
| Message | I enjoyed the development of the story both character and plot. There was a tension between the couple that you mastered wonderfully which left the reader wanting them to get closer. Could there be any moer to this. Great writing look forward to more.  |
| Date | 23-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Meeting in Chicago by Sweet_P |
| Message | A romantic and passionate story. I loved the image of "my entire mind is gone" and how you carried that through your lovely tale. You so perfectly describe and capture the type of love and passion that allows one to magically lose themselves in another. To be able to completely let yourself go, to experience extreme pleasure with someone you care that much about, is one of life's most beautiful experiences. Thank you for expressing such intense and heartfelt emotions and passions in your story. You moved me and made me feel the heat with your words. |
| Date | 18-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Surrendering to Lust |
| Message | Whew!! Bella that was one hot story!! I like the wall better because it doesn't rattle or shake. lol Your writing is getting wonderfully good!! Hold you head hi because you have a nice little bunch of stories here now to be proud of. |
| Date | 16-Sep-2009 |
| Story | A Wedding REception Enjoyed by Simon |
| Message | This was very well written and hot hot hot - you created the urgency of the lovers wonderfully and their passion filled the story. I particularly liked the back to reality time check at the end with the onlookers - be great to have more from this very naughty couple! |
| Date | 16-Sep-2009 |
| Story | Surrendering to Lust by Bella |
| Message | very hot and sexy a job well done! |
| Date | 15-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | The Frollicking Flight attendent |
| Message | Wow! I was going to leave a long positive critique but all I can say is wow! and now I have something to attend to!  |
| Date | 15-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Surrendering to Lust |
| Message | OMG Bella, this was so hot! Right from the beginning! ....the characters are SO in love and the lust is so real in your writing! The images were very lush casuing feelings so deep! This story left me wet and wanting more! |
| Date | 14-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | A Wedding Reception Enjoyed by Simon |
| Message | A wonderful, passionate, 'can't wait to have you' story, that vividly draws the reader into it's love and urgency to share the ultimate moment. The story is well told and imaginative, and its daring and humor makes the reader smile and wish they were one of the characters. A really great read! |
| Date | 14-Sep-2009 |
| Story | A nice way to come home by Sweet P |
| Message | Sweet, what an amazing and hot story. I loved every minute reading it. I could totally understand her and how exhausted she was. Wish I had someone like that to come home to. Please keep writting. Hugs, B |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Ellen's Story - In The Name Of Love |
| Message | Usually stories of wives pestered into partner swapping conclude with the wife leaving their husband because they are sexually awakened so to speak. Nice to read a totally new take on an old idea, and so well explained from Ellen's point of view. Plus a great little twist at the end. |
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