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| Date | 25-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Sometimes Big is Beautiful by British Gent |
| Message | A very fine story told with an honest, revealing flair. Excellent descriptions and imagery. It was nice, for a change, to read about someone who didn't have a 'perfect' body. A perceptive look upon the motives and reactions of different times in a person's life. |
| Date | 25-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Trick or Treat Chicago by sweet_p |
| Message | UN-holy cow!!! What a fantastic Halloween tale! You weave your story with just the right amount of creepy atmosphere mixed with wonderfully descriptive sex. That was quite a night to be remembered . . . A superb job of writing with a nice twisty ending. Thanks for a terrific read.  |
| Date | 22-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | A Slightly Different Picnic by Bella |
| Message | A lovely story where two people decide to enjoy the shared pleasures that a day inside the bedroom can bring. A veritable blanket of goodies spread out for each other and they feast upon each other over and over again. The description is wonderful and the wording is very exciting. It really put me in the mood as I lost myself in your characters. Terrific story, Bella. |
| Date | 21-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Awakening by Erotic Words |
| Message | A marvelous description of how real it can feel when a lover's voice describes the things he wants to do to you. The right man saying just the right things can make your body feel as if he is right there with you, inside you. The orgasms produced this way can be exquisite. You did a lovely job waking my mind with your story. Very nicely written. |
| Date | 21-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Sometimes Big is Beautiful ~ British Gent |
| Message | I thoroughly loved this story - I warmed to the voice of your male character and his honesty and the erotica was perfect - a faultless story and a great read! Thanks. |
| Date | 21-Oct-2009 |
| Story | The Golf Weekend ~ Curious Couple |
| Message | I am such a fan of your writing and this was no exception - hot hot hot all the way! |
| Date | 21-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Afternoon Break - His_Response |
| Message | An enjoyable passage of erotica although I do prefer a little more substance to a short story, character development, etc. but you demonstrated your talent for writing. Perhaps incorporate this passage into a larger story that is bursting to get out! |
| Date | 21-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Breaking Boundaries ~ His_Response |
| Message | Well written - cheeky ending! Top marks |
| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Vacation Deviation |
| Message | I loved this even more than when I first read it. Know you as the author makes the story much more erotic. I like the title...it is not what you think. Kudos Shinzon...you keep me turned on! |
| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Vacation Deviation |
| Message | omg this was so hot! I will have to comment in private just how arousing this story was to read! Great job! |
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