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| Date | 20-Aug-2009 |
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| Message | A great read very sensual and erotic certainly got me buzzing.  |
| Date | 17-Aug-2009 |
| Story | A Slightly Different Picnic by Bella |
| Message | An exciting tale of explicit naughtiness, I loved it.  |
| Date | 17-Aug-2009 |
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| Story | ellens story |
| Message | another great story.it somehow seems more erotic knowing it was written by a woman.it really was like being there.a great talent for writing erotica,and nice to have believable characters.i really enjoyed it. |
| Date | 30-Jul-2009 |
| Story | Leather and Passion by Spanky |
| Message | An enjoyable quickie leaving the reader wanting to know what else they had in store. Personally I would have liked to have had the characters named to make them more rounded. The repetition of 'my lover' could have been replaced at times. However a well written story. Look forward to reading more. |
| Date | 24-Jul-2009 |
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| Story | Surprise party |
| Message |  That was a great story, I could only imagine the plesuer the boyfriend got from watching this happen to his girl. I wish this for my g/f and meThanks |
| Date | 06-Jul-2009 |
| Story | Behind the Mask of Akimo by Vivienne |
| Message | God is in the details! I have to say i loved all of the details that you put into this story. It is a beautifully crafted story. My only criticism...Chardonnay! Ah well one man's posion... Still an absolutely fabulous story! Wylie. |
| Date | 06-Jul-2009 |
| Story | Surprise Party by Shaded Voice |
| Message | Saffron wrote: Surprise Party ~ Shaded Voice I was totally aroused and engrosed in this story ~ I loved the atmosphere, the characters, faultless in fact ~ I hope this is the start of more from you, it would be such a waste to keep your talent hidden. Bravo !!! Saffy Can I ditto the above, I loved it. Vi XXX |
| Date | 06-Jul-2009 |
| Story | Surprise Party by Shaded Voice |
| Message | I am not sure where to start, I always knew you had the makings of a great writer of erotica and your story has just shown me that my suspicions were correct, I was totally aroused and engrosed in this story ~ I loved the atmosphere, the characters, faultless in fact ~ I hope this is the start of more from you, it would be such a waste to keep your talent hidden. Bravo !!! Saffy |
| Date | 06-Jul-2009 |
| Story | The Partnership by Vivienne |
| Message | Great great story, Vi! My favorite line: “His fingers found her silky wet lips and the wet sounds of her honey were a delight to his ears as he f*cked her with his fingers.” More! More! |
| Date | 06-Jul-2009 |
| Story | Skype Me by Saffron |
| Message | Loved this story! I love how “Temptress” describes her outfit; very tempting indeed. There’s something about a woman wearing her man’s clothing that makes her very vulnerable and soft and willing. I like that a lot. Her willingness is further evident as she continues the conversation with “Ghost” even as he begins to be somewhat bold in telling her what to do without waiting to know how well this will go over. Clearly he can sense that she enjoys that kind of thing and she responds positively, increasing the heat of the story in a hurry. And then how willingly she allows that heat to build between them until her climax…it makes her the ultimate lover. Finally, the revelation in the last line made me smile. Fantastic story! |
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