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| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
| Story | The Dream by DesertWolfAZ |
| Message | and what a lovely dream that was, beautifully written, descriptive enough to allow the reader to feel the character's erotic dream. |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
| Story | The Call by DesertWolfAZ |
| Message | "Sat munching the sandwich and sipping the tequila".... who would have thought that minutes later he would be aroused on the phone. I enjoyed this short story.  |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | The Waterfall by DesertWolfAZ |
| Message | This story was so beautifully written it could have been about the Omaha Farm Report and been good. But it wasn't and it was right on as usual for this author. For beginners, this is a good author to read to see beautiful description, they way I ought to be. |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
| Story | A Nice Way to Come Home ~ Sweet P |
| Message | wow that was a greeting indeed, you made it very easy to relate to the characters and the story flowed to the erotic build up beautifully ~ well done! ***** five stars from me |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
| Story | The Hayloft ~ by Simon |
| Message | Sensual, seductive, emotive ....a great example of first person writing I really felt the desire running throughout ~ thoroughly enjoyed The Hayloft thanks for sharing. ***** 5 stars from me |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | The Partnership by Vivienne |
| Message | Oh Vi, this was so hot!! I just loved the idea of how good it must have made her feel to know someone was that turned on by her picture. This was so original, hot, and all rolled into a partnership by your wonderful writing skills. |
| Date | 05-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Awakening by Erotic Words |
| Message | A highly original piece of work. This story tries and succeeds at pulling off phone sex where the phone has video capabilities. This is definitely this author's best written piece as it is challenging, original and a smooth story to read. |
| Date | 05-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Marooned by Wylie Coyote |
| Message | A wonderfully well-written adventure in a sci-fi mode. Highly imaginative and playful, while being really steamy in the sex scenes. Well worth the time taken to read it. About as imaginative a use of the desert island theme as I know of. |
| Date | 05-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Like Never Before by Erotic Words |
| Message | This short piece is quite a little adventure, as much in learning, as in heat. It has an apt title as it introduces elements to love-play that I learned about for the first time. Yes, It shows some real cleverness on the part of the male character but I did not feel the heat it generated as in other stories. It is well written though and my take is just my own opinion. One thing is for sure, there is a lot of originality and imaginative talent here. There is great potential in that as long as it gets more smoothly worked into better story writing. I hope this does not discourage but encourage you ER to take the leap to great story writing, combined with your imagination, it could lead to some really top drawer stuff. |
| Date | 05-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Breakfast by Erotic Words |
| Message | An imaginative little number that any of us could have found ourselves in but not necessarily have anticipated. It is very steamy and erotic, and has a nice twist at the end. Very original. |
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