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| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Skype Me by Saffron |
| Message | Wow, this story goes to show that the written word is so often much more sexy than pictures can ever be. Looking forward to reading some more of your work. |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | A Hard Rain Is Gonna Fall |
| Message | omg Wylie I was stunned the first time I read this! It is superb! Not at all like the other stories I have read. Your descriptions paint such vivid pictures in my mind. I enjoyed the myriad of emotions making this a truly unique story. I enjoy reading what you write! Thank you for sharing. |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Skype Me |
| Message | WOW! I loved reading this story! The format is so unique! It makes me want to go out and get skype! How exciting it must be to have a mans voice in my head! Hearing him makes it seem more real... Your story leaves me wet and wanting more! Nice job! |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | The Hayloft |
| Message | Your writing style is unique among what I have read. In the beginning you thoroughly set up his desire for her. I like the sensitivity of his character. Very romantic and tender. |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Caught |
| Message | This was written with such tenderness...I normally do not get into stories about 3-somes but this was very erotic! The ending after the part with the tears was the best for me....but all in all it was very well written, and seemed very real. |
| Date | 13-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | A Wedding Reception Enjoyed |
| Message | Wow! This is a departure from your usual stories Eric. I like that you stretch yourself...maybe out of your comfort zone. You may appeal to some new readers. Wish it was a bit longer...the story was over before I ....well, nevermind..... It was a fun read, Simon....thanks for sharing |
| Date | 08-Sep-2009 |
| Story | The Switch by Logosity |
| Message | I have to say I loved Logosity's style. Although not my normal of genre for reading, I got to know this story very well over the time I have been waiting to put it on R~SVP. Some aspects were not my thing but I thought the interaction between the couple was very enlightening.  |
| Date | 08-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Skype Me by Saffron |
| Message | Undeniably, one of the hottest, most original pieces I have ever read. It left me breathless and just about speechless, and , well..... Beautiful bit of writing. Wish I had Temptress' IM connection. LOL  Lawwdy lawwdy!! What a woman!! |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | City Lights--Returning the Sentiment |
| Message | What a powerful follow up to the first part!! This was another top piece of work. Some interesting twists in this one! Hot hot! Once again, good work Vi! |
| Date | 07-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | City Lights by Vivienne |
| Message | Utterly scorching and very powerfully written story one can't put down. Vintage Vivienne writing skills and a dreamlike wish we who spend most of our time in offices and chairs hold sacred to our hearts. Just once I would like to see a woman lift herself up for him like that. Nice scene at the end. Great job on this hottie Vi! |
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