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| Date | 01-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Into The Mist - By peppercorn |
| Message | I wasn't sure what was happening at first but soon got caught up with the incredible imagery and metaphors that make this short piece quite remarkable and very sensual. You are a great writer! |
| Date | 01-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Better Than Any Dream - By Bella |
| Message | Bella! Wow that was hot I could feel Kate's desire and longing for her partner, simply written but very effective. A good example of lust meeting love. Now I need to find someone to act that story out!  |
| Date | 01-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Dear Diary by sweet p |
| Message | I enjoyed this story sweet and loved the diary format, you managed it to perfection with good build up. Well done  |
| Date | 30-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | The Waterfall by DesertWolfAZ |
| Message | Evocative description and sensual imagery complete the picture in this lovely story. You marvelously convey the visuals to your reader. You make me wish I were there for the experience. I especially loved the image of the ending. Well done. |
| Date | 30-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | A Hard Rain's Gonna Fall by Wyliecoyote |
| Message | Words cannot begin to describe the emotions your story has stirred within me. Vivid description and an intimate painting of your characters made for a very real experience of your superbly written story. Thank you for making it so real. |
| Date | 30-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Skype Me by Saffron |
| Message | A perfectly paced story, concise and well written. Your story shows imagination and excellent command of the language to express both ideas and emotions. Fantastic ending, as well. Super job, Saff! |
| Date | 29-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Patience and Self-control by Shinzon |
| Message | A very hot story with excellent detail and pacing. The excitement of your character comes across clearly to your reader. The experience can be felt through your vivid descriptions. A super job! Thanks. |
| Date | 29-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | A Short Break |
| Message | LOVE this story. Doesn't hurt that it plays directly into my own personal fantasies, but the setting and character development were very nicely paced, as was the progress of the sexual endgame. One minor plot issue; the writer's wife appears to be in her panties without any reference to having removed any other piece of clothing previously... this caught me off guard a bit. But aside from this very niggling little detail, this story is HOT HOT HOT!  |
| Date | 29-Sep-2009 |
| Story | A Short Break by Curious Couple |
| Message | Perfect! I loved the subject, the characters were real and the scenario a dream! Nothing sordid about this chance meeting - more please! |
| Date | 29-Sep-2009 |
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| Story | Switch by Logosity |
| Message | A vividly described and detailed story, full of curious tension and fascinating characters. The writing flowed smoothly and pulled the reader forward, wanting more, watching the action almost voyeuristically. Expressive wording and an interesting perspective on bdsm completed the enjoyment. I loved the well-developed twist at the end. It was completely unexpected. Well done. |
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