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Namepeppercorn
Date24-Nov-2009
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StoryA Chance Meeting by Saffron
MessageRemembrance and Reality--So lovingly described, the reader can feel every emotion, every embrace. Beautifully displayed words draw the reader along until the poignant close. Superb story.


Nameerotic section
Date14-Nov-2009
StoryThe Homecoming
MessageI read this a few weeks ago and should have commented then. I love this tale because it acknowledges the ravages of time and circumstances apart, while at the same time affirming an underlying bond - a cleansing process, if you will.


Namepeppercorn
Date12-Nov-2009
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StoryAfternoon Break by His_response
MessagePerfect pacing, delicious description. Reminded me of a time way back when. Your words paint the page with passion and sizzle. Even though we barely know your characters, we feel their connections and sense their emotions for each other. Expertly crafted story. Thank you.

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Namesweet_p
Date06-Nov-2009
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StoryBirthday Present
MessageOMG Q! I never thought I could be turned on by reading about 2 girls! I think you have an amazing way with words that channels directly into the female brain. Whew, this story was such a surprise for me-- the plot, and my reaction. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors.


Namepeppercorn
Date04-Nov-2009
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StoryThe Partnership by Vivienne
MessageA very hot and juicy story that may teach you how to handle your co-workers! Imaginative and original story line, well written with sizzling description. Very nicely done, indeed . . .


Namepeppercorn
Date04-Nov-2009
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StoryStella Meets the Vicar pts 1 & 2 by British Gent
MessageQuite an imaginative and unusual story, told with smooth style and vivid words. You like the characters immediately and the situation is entertaining, to say the least. Each episode makes you wish to move right on to the next one. I hope there is a third part coming soon.


Namepeppercorn
Date02-Nov-2009
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StoryKate by DesertWolfAZ
MessageVivid, intense, arousing . . . This story blazed its action for the reader! The incredible detail and the manner in which you describe each moment allow your reader to feel the experiences that Karen felt. Perfectly written, definitely enjoyed!

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Namepeppercorn
Date02-Nov-2009
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StoryBirthday Present by His_Response
MessageThis was such an incredibly hot story, Q! I don't know how you write this so well. I've been on both sides of your story, and I can't write it as well as you can. This was simply amazing! Thank you for sharing your talents with us. Your story was a superbly enjoyable and erotic read.

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NameSaffron
Date26-Oct-2009
StoryTrick or treat Chicago - sweet_p
MessageWow that was a really hot story, I loved the concept of the story and the erotica was amazing - I wish you had continued with the ending a little more, it was a tad abrupt, almost as if you wanted to get it finished quickly, which was a shame as the rest was a great. A perfect tale for Halloween. Well done! smilie smilie smilie smilie


Namehis_response
Date26-Oct-2009
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StoryTrick or Treat Chicago
MessageGREAT story! I loved the ending. You had me throbbing by the end... *growl!*

smilie


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