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| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | The Cove |
| Message | Oh My! I felt like Beth when I read this story; my body so desiring Rob. Your words paint the most lovely and erotic images. Thank you for sharing. |
| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | The Homecoming |
| Message | I was not turned on in the beginning but I had to keep reading...kind of like how you have to look if you come upon a car accident...I was glad the ending was happy but I am worried for her next time he comes home drunk... very real for some people I imagine. Great writing! You really made me care for her. |
| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Walk With Me |
| Message | Wow Pepper! I really liked your story....the memories at the beginning had me hooked...then I couldnt wait to see how you turned the tragedy around. This was so tender and romantic...I loved reading it! |
| Date | 16-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | Vacation Deviation by his_response |
| Message | You describe the action so well in your steamy story, you really had me going. I could feel the connection between Mark and Beth, and the underlying 'naughtyness' of what was going on between them. When they smiled, I smiled. You tell your story well. |
| Date | 15-Oct-2009 |
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| Story | The Cove by his_response |
| Message | You wrote your story with such vivid description I felt I was there by the shore with your characters. The intensity of your words was powerful. I could feel what was happening within my own body. These are definitely characters I would love to follow in a wider plot. Great job. |
| Date | 12-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Victoria's Secret |
| Message | Well I absolutely love this, is all I can say  |
| Date | 12-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Victoria's Secret by Shinzon |
| Message | Very powerful erotica - great plot - perfect! |
| Date | 12-Oct-2009 |
| Story | A Short Break by Curious Couple |
| Message | I absolutely loved this story!! what a great gift you have, the characters were so well developed and the plot and erotica sizzling - I will be back for a second read at some stage - I wonder why  Thanks for sharing. |
| Date | 12-Oct-2009 |
| Story | The Cove by His Response |
| Message | Another hot story and lucky Beth again. You are very good at describing the erotica but I would say that as you have introduced specific characters don't forget about them when writing the erotica - it can get slightly mundane reading he, she, his, hers, remember to bring their names back to the sex so we can identify with them more. Great work and thanks for sharing! S x |
| Date | 12-Oct-2009 |
| Story | Vacation Deviation by His Response |
| Message | Lucky Beth is all I can say - a very hot story! Well done ! |
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