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| Date | 2008-06-17 |
| Message | More great feedback  Vicky: wonderful review thank you! yes, i had trouble getting my mind around bringing up big brother, too, though it could pose some interesting scenarios! Rhûn'waew's inability to sense the child will be explained soon; i might make legolas and elrond fret but their relationship provides enough challenges and i doubt it could survive loss of the babe, even if they didn't fade. Glad you like the way the twins are coming around! they are nearly fully healed and since their relationship is much longer than legolas' and elrond's, it is much more stable. they are good role models for the young wood elf, if he will only listen. you are right about legolas and his many secrets! he should know better, but we've seen his track record now, haven't we? and oh yes Aras would have a field day with that one. you take care too and thank you again! Kort: ah feud. sigh. i will try but can promise no more than that. glad you enjoyed the update! yes, Aras is just asking for it. good news on the internet connection! i'm still going to the library and using the connection at work. sorry the folks ar your work are giving you a hard time, people are so ignorant sometimes. hang in there! thanks for your compliments, they are just lovely and make my day  |
| Date | 2008-06-16 |
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| Your Favourite Story | feud |
| Requests? | more of anything, especially feud |
| How did you find me? | aff |
| Message | I just got done reading the three new chapters and loved them. I am glad Elrond told off Aras. I was excited to find such a major update since I have been without internet for a while. I just got a roommate who insisted on having internet and since we are now splitting bills I can afford it. Side note: having a male roommate who can cook (since I don't) is great. Unfortunately since it is a coworker it seems everyone wants us to defend ourselves for moving in together. Stupid people join the present, males and females can be friends and live together without sleeping together. I also pissed off the girl who is crushing on him, but oh well. I can't wait for another update. You have to be my absolute favorite writer for LotR and tied for first place with a lady named Tricia of favorite slash writer of all time. Kort |
| Date | 2008-06-15 |
| Message | It was worth the wait to end up with a bumper treat of 3 chapters to read in one go! So Rhûn'waew is expecting Galbreth! Although this was a shock to Legolas, I think that this is good news. As you pointed out, Legolas doesn't always think things through and I don't think he'd considered the strain that would be placed on his relationship with Elrond by the mind-boggling situation of giving birth to his own older brother! Especially considering that yet again he has demonstrated his difficulty with communicating openly with Elrond. So I'm glad this is a new soul. I am worried by the fact that Rhûn'waew can't sense the baby. I hope we got reassurance on that soon. I love the twins' house! It sounds perfect. I'm so glad you were able to incorporate the flashback concerning what happened between Legolas and the twins in these chapters. Elladan and Elrohir are rapidly improving in my eyes  I wonder if Legolas thinks he can keep his bond with the twins secret? I can't see how he would be able to fool Rhûn'waew. But I hope Aras doesn't find out - I can't see him accepting it quietly. There are so many more details I'd like to comment on, but I'm running out of characters! Maybe I'll comment later when I've read it through again. Take care! |
| Date | 2008-06-15 |
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| Message | i went over it all again and now i am worried: why rhun-vaew can't see her grandchild? elrond is not going to get twins again, is he?, or will the child choose mortality too? and the hint about the arranged marriage and how legolas was carefully not given that bit of news: i have a feeling that aras will use it to hurt him again. and the twins... ah i love them and the way they act when they are with legolas, in a way they are more intuitive and suit legolas better than their ada. about the child name: my vote for galurem, i am a fan of the dragon prince of balrog! |
| Date | 2008-06-14 |
| Message | Ceren Cae: Thank You! I am so glad you enjoyed this update! i admit i'm having a hard time deciding how thranduil will react to the twins, but i think he and rhun'waew want what's best. surprisingly, he might find many things he and Elrond can commiserate about as time goes on. we'll see also glad you don't mind looking inside each one's head (Legolas and Elrond), felt it's important to remember how different they are. and i too think Gladhadithen is one of the best characters i've developed. she's great! Stef: oh thank you! yes, i don't know even now if there is too much here, not enough, or if it fits together all right.glad you agree with Legolas sudden insecurity over the child. i remember feeling that way too. your thoughts on Arwen are tight on target. she was worried about how deep her father's feelings for Legolas were, and now she has proof that they are real and true. I think she will be a stabilising influence on the household, which is not functioning quite as it normally does. and i think you're right, she'll feel better knowing her father has someone by his side when that day comes and she tells him of her love for Aragorn. |
| Date | 2008-06-14 |
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| Message | oh my! that really was something! I read the whole three chapters last night, but have to read all another time!! great as always, i think i understand now your problem with details, you covered a lot in these last pages. i also understand how legolas feel when i was pregnant i spent nights on end wondering if i was ready or not to have a child. and the little scene with thranduil and rhun-vaew was quite endearing! on with arwen arrival now, i hope she will not blame legolas for her adar illnes and for having conceived a child without her adar consent. i think most probably she will be happy, knowing that his new mate and child could sustain her father when she finally will announce she chose mortality to be with aragorn |
| Date | 2008-06-13 |
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| Your Favourite Story | Today, it is Aerlinn of course! |
| Requests? | a return to Hir o Meril Thafn after Aerlinn's end? |
| Message | Awww! I'm pretty sure that this is my absolute favorite update ever! You've really outdone yourself. My heart is full of warm fuzzies. These wonderful, awesome, amazing chapters were well worth the meager wait. I absolutely adore all of your characters, but in this update I particularly enjoyed Thranduil (who is just so much fun) and the Twins. They crack me up, especially Elladan and his childish wave. I was so happy to read the reunion of Legolas and the twins, and the house was brilliant. I love the way you switch back and forth between Elrond and Legolas' thought processes, so that we can always see where one or the other is going wrong, but you can still surprise us all the time. (sigh) That was so great. I think I'll go read it again. p.s. Thanks for including Gladhadithen! What a great character. |
| Date | 2008-06-10 |
| Message | Hi Therina, yes, that last chapter of Meril Thafn just left everything hanging. I do want to get back to it but I have to finish Aearlinn. hopefully, no more big problems! |
| Date | 2008-06-10 |
| Message | And now, I read chapter twelve of Hîr O Meril Thafn! Mean end there.. And I see your answer to my message a few days ago, looks like I managed to make it private, that was not my intention.. I did have trouble posting it, I tried all possible versions so make my computer send it away.. But thankyou for promising more of the story! And DO I know what you're talking about! I'm the expert on starting too many project with too many ideas!! So good luck with sorting it all out. Tina |
| Date | 2008-06-10 |
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| Your Favourite Story | all, this far |
| Message | Well, I'm reading chapter 11. Just to let you know, as you asked.. Tina |
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