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Nameerobey
Date2008-07-19
MessageFeedback smilie Hurray!

Thanks Stef! what would I do without you smilie Did i really say Galbreth had so many young ones? smilie Ai! I did not remember that. That's what I get for trying to be too clever. well, i guess i better get back to work on the last chapter and fix that mistake. But you are right about Rhun'waew. and I have an extra little twist to her story, too, that i can't share yet as it bears on another issue that hasn't been resolved. as for Faron and Sul, they are the same character. Faron first appeared in another unfinished story that resides in the group files only, and I've been using him as Legolas' best friend ever since. oh well, i just want Legolas' friend to be a certain way and can't seem to get past that. I will think about it some more and see what else I can come up with.

Ebbingnight: so happy you enjoyed it the chapter, too! thank you.
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Namestef
Date2008-07-19
Your Favourite Storycuthenin aerlinn
Messagehi everyone! i am gone for a weeks or so and coming back i find not one but two updates?? i'm going to leave more often!

Cuthenin: new chapter was so intense! sweet and sad at the same time...
i know calarlim meant well but she was also so jelously possessive toward legolas that neither his father nor his brothers had any possibility to be open to him and let him know that he was not despised for his nature or the circumstances of his birth...
the ale of thranduil's birthday party is brilliant! and the last bit, ah uyou had me in tears.

As for Aerlin, i quite like both Faelon and Faron (it showss that you are writing the two stories together, Faron and Sulchim are really similar), and i liked the way you introduced Elril character.
Tolkien tells nothing about the lost sons of Dior but your take on that story is realistic: i also wondered often on the powers of the beornings.
the succession works in a very complicated way, i admit you lost me halfway through elril's explanation, butr i understand that legolas is quite a disturbance for Aras.
two questions: back in the chapter regarding the sylvans arrival didn't you say that galbreth had fathered nine children?
legolas said and rhùnwaew herself confirmed that she was born in imladris, but galbreth was already an adult with many descendants at dagorland. did she died there and was recreated by her parents or some relative (not cured by noldorin healers) as to give thranduil his mate back as soon as possible?
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NameEbbingnight
Date2008-07-18
Your Favourite StoryAerlinn
MessageThank you for the wonderful new chapter, explanations and all!
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Nameerobey
Date2008-07-18
MessageWell it's taken a while but I am her to say Thank You smilie
Vicky: So happy you enjoyed the Cuthenin chapter. No doubt, you're kind words helped inspire me to take the story up again. I don't know how quickly I can put together another chapter as Aearlinn once more has me in its grip, but Cuthenin is so close to completion that I am itching to get it done.
Ceren Cae: Pleased I am that you liked this episode of Cuthenin,and that Sul is becoming a favourite. I confess I have trouble at times keeping Sul and Faron separate,for in my mind they are essentially the same character,just with different names for different stories. hope that doesn't make it unpleasant or confusing.
Ebbingnight: Ah, you found your way here from Shadowess' site! She gave me my very first venue for fanfiction by being the list-owner of legolas in chains yahoo group.That is where the very first chapter of Feud went up. glad you are enjoying Aearlinn.
Annie: I am so proud to be featured on Luna's site. Her art is just beautiful and the project she has undertaken is amazing. I cannot imagine translating anything into a different language,much less something as wordy as Feud! Chapter 7 is indeed a very sad chapter. There is not much in Feud that is easy to read, i'm afraid. Thank you for your kind words.
mithriel: oh it is amazing to know people in china are reading Feud! gives me goosebumps! where and how did you find me? thank you for signing in! I like your closing:

Love and Peace, ya'll smilie
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Namemithriel
Date2008-07-17
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Your Favourite StoryFeud, Aerlinn
MessageHey~I really enjoy the stories and art works here~
Feud is one of most indelible slash I've ever read since years ago.smilie
This is my first comment here,just want to tell you that you have lots of fans in China,although they probably don't know this site.
Love & Peace! smilie
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NameAnnie
Date2008-07-17
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Your Favourite StoryFeud
How did you find me?From Luna's website
MessageI'm reading the Ch.7 of Feud. Poor Legolas, Mirkwood elves treat him so bad. Keep reading. It is a good fiction, thank you. smilie
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NameEbbingnight
Date2008-07-16
Your Favourite StoryAerlinn
How did you find me?via Slashfiction
MessageLove this story: can't wait for the wedding!
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NameCeren Cae
Date2008-07-13
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Your Favourite StoryAll, I refuse to pick
MessageThat was a truly awesome chapter!
Sûlchim is quickly climbing the ranks in my list of favorite characters from your stories, and Legolas' brothers are absolutely fantastic. The conversation between Sûlchim and Legolas was so great; I'm glad Legolas has a friend who can be so frank with him.
The story-telling competition was a work of genius, I was also near tears about Thranduil's reaction.
You are brilliant, and the new format looks beautiful!
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NameVicky
Date2008-07-13
MessageI can't tell you how excited I was to see the update to Cuthenin. I had to do my happy dance before settling down to read smilie

It was worth the wait! We get to see Legolas and Glorfindel going through so many emotions here and each moment was beautifully done. I think my favourite moment was when Glorfindel realised that Legolas was his ideal companion. If he had doubts about the match beforehand, I don't think he has now.

The tale-telling with the brothers was brilliant (and surprisingly moving at the end with the description of Thranduil's reaction to Legolas' note). Having brothers myself, I have every sympathy for Legolas here smilie

I also enjoyed the separate little talks Legolas and Glorfindel had - with Legolas' cousin egging him on to consummate the bond asap and his brothers warning Glorfindel off. At least Glorfindel understands the need to be careful not to wound Legolas' ego. I'm looking forward to seeing how that plays out. I think Legolas will be making his move soon.

Finally, the end had me in tears when Legolas was gathering up Calarlim's remains. I was so glad he had Glorfindel there to comfort him.

A wonderful update - it really made my afternoon. BTW, I was touched to be mentioned in your dedication. I'm glad my reviews have been encouraging smilie

Vicky
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NameCeren Cae
Date2008-07-11
MessageThanks erobey!
I have officially joined the group, so if anyone wants to follow me, we can pick up the discussion over there!
It'll be lots of fun, and all the cool kids are doing it! :D
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