| Date | 2008-07-19 |
| Message | Feedback Hurray!Thanks Stef! what would I do without you Did i really say Galbreth had so many young ones? Ai! I did not remember that. That's what I get for trying to be too clever. well, i guess i better get back to work on the last chapter and fix that mistake. But you are right about Rhun'waew. and I have an extra little twist to her story, too, that i can't share yet as it bears on another issue that hasn't been resolved. as for Faron and Sul, they are the same character. Faron first appeared in another unfinished story that resides in the group files only, and I've been using him as Legolas' best friend ever since. oh well, i just want Legolas' friend to be a certain way and can't seem to get past that. I will think about it some more and see what else I can come up with.Ebbingnight: so happy you enjoyed it the chapter, too! thank you. |
| Date | 2008-07-19 |
| Your Favourite Story | cuthenin aerlinn |
| Message | hi everyone! i am gone for a weeks or so and coming back i find not one but two updates?? i'm going to leave more often! Cuthenin: new chapter was so intense! sweet and sad at the same time... i know calarlim meant well but she was also so jelously possessive toward legolas that neither his father nor his brothers had any possibility to be open to him and let him know that he was not despised for his nature or the circumstances of his birth... the ale of thranduil's birthday party is brilliant! and the last bit, ah uyou had me in tears. As for Aerlin, i quite like both Faelon and Faron (it showss that you are writing the two stories together, Faron and Sulchim are really similar), and i liked the way you introduced Elril character. Tolkien tells nothing about the lost sons of Dior but your take on that story is realistic: i also wondered often on the powers of the beornings. the succession works in a very complicated way, i admit you lost me halfway through elril's explanation, butr i understand that legolas is quite a disturbance for Aras. two questions: back in the chapter regarding the sylvans arrival didn't you say that galbreth had fathered nine children? legolas said and rhùnwaew herself confirmed that she was born in imladris, but galbreth was already an adult with many descendants at dagorland. did she died there and was recreated by her parents or some relative (not cured by noldorin healers) as to give thranduil his mate back as soon as possible? |
| Date | 2008-07-18 |
| Your Favourite Story | Aerlinn |
| Message | Thank you for the wonderful new chapter, explanations and all! |
| Date | 2008-07-18 |
| Message | Well it's taken a while but I am her to say Thank You ![]() Vicky: So happy you enjoyed the Cuthenin chapter. No doubt, you're kind words helped inspire me to take the story up again. I don't know how quickly I can put together another chapter as Aearlinn once more has me in its grip, but Cuthenin is so close to completion that I am itching to get it done. Ceren Cae: Pleased I am that you liked this episode of Cuthenin,and that Sul is becoming a favourite. I confess I have trouble at times keeping Sul and Faron separate,for in my mind they are essentially the same character,just with different names for different stories. hope that doesn't make it unpleasant or confusing. Ebbingnight: Ah, you found your way here from Shadowess' site! She gave me my very first venue for fanfiction by being the list-owner of legolas in chains yahoo group.That is where the very first chapter of Feud went up. glad you are enjoying Aearlinn. Annie: I am so proud to be featured on Luna's site. Her art is just beautiful and the project she has undertaken is amazing. I cannot imagine translating anything into a different language,much less something as wordy as Feud! Chapter 7 is indeed a very sad chapter. There is not much in Feud that is easy to read, i'm afraid. Thank you for your kind words. mithriel: oh it is amazing to know people in china are reading Feud! gives me goosebumps! where and how did you find me? thank you for signing in! I like your closing: Love and Peace, ya'll ![]() |
| Date | 2008-07-16 |
| Your Favourite Story | Aerlinn |
| How did you find me? | via Slashfiction |
| Message | Love this story: can't wait for the wedding! |
| Date | 2008-07-13 |
| Message | I can't tell you how excited I was to see the update to Cuthenin. I had to do my happy dance before settling down to read It was worth the wait! We get to see Legolas and Glorfindel going through so many emotions here and each moment was beautifully done. I think my favourite moment was when Glorfindel realised that Legolas was his ideal companion. If he had doubts about the match beforehand, I don't think he has now. The tale-telling with the brothers was brilliant (and surprisingly moving at the end with the description of Thranduil's reaction to Legolas' note). Having brothers myself, I have every sympathy for Legolas here I also enjoyed the separate little talks Legolas and Glorfindel had - with Legolas' cousin egging him on to consummate the bond asap and his brothers warning Glorfindel off. At least Glorfindel understands the need to be careful not to wound Legolas' ego. I'm looking forward to seeing how that plays out. I think Legolas will be making his move soon. Finally, the end had me in tears when Legolas was gathering up Calarlim's remains. I was so glad he had Glorfindel there to comfort him. A wonderful update - it really made my afternoon. BTW, I was touched to be mentioned in your dedication. I'm glad my reviews have been encouraging Vicky |
| Date | 2008-07-11 |
| Message | Thanks erobey! I have officially joined the group, so if anyone wants to follow me, we can pick up the discussion over there! It'll be lots of fun, and all the cool kids are doing it! :D |