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Namekort
Date2008-06-29
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Your Favourite Storyfeud
Requests?anything
How did you find me?aff
MessageJust got finished reading the new chapter. I loved it. The ant thing was great. It made me think of the newest Indiana movie for a minute (what? I grew up on Harrison Ford movies especially Star Wars). I also liked that you did pair Erestor and Lindir. I can just see them a hundred or so years from now getting into an arguement and Lindir bringing up Erestor's behavior from now and him screaming that he's changed and when is Lindir ever going to let him live that down (which he has changed and Lindir has let it go hopefully, heheh).

Good luck on your travels. I hope you have fun. I also hope to send you a new reader or two. I tell everyone at work that you and Tricia are my absolute favorite writers and they should all check out your work. The guys aren't too thrilled with the idea but some of the girls are.

Kort
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Namestef
Date2008-06-29
Your Favourite Storyaerlinn feud
Messagelovely! i knew things could be resolved between Erestor and Lindir, and they can really heal eache other after sol ong.
i still hope we will learn something about lindir mother's fate and that it was somewhat kinder than those of lindir adar and sister.

thanduil is a fantistc father, he is out for revenge and i think we all will enjoy his sway to get it.
things don't stand well for the twins either.. i'm waiting for the fireworks!!!

finally i hope your van makes it, and that you can check in soon!
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NameVicky
Date2008-06-29
MessageThank you for another wonderful chapter!

I'm so glad to see the situation resolved between Erestor and Lindir. Let's hope there are no further misunderstandings between them - I think they will be perfect together.

Your Thranduil is magnificent! There is something almost Solomon-esque about him in his choice of punishment for Erestor - very apt. And I enjoyed the glimpses of Wood Elf magic we get to see here.

I can't wait to find out what sort of hunt the Chiavari is. I've got images of Elrond being chased through the woods of Imladris by a pack of feral Sylvans smilie

BTW I like the way Legolas has suddenly become 'Our' Sylvan, instead of 'That' Sylvan, at least with Meribel. It's amazing the difference a word can make.

Have a safe journey!
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NameCeren Cae
Date2008-06-28
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Your Favourite StoryAerlinn, Feud, Hir o Meril Thafn
Requests?that you drive across the country successfully
MessageI officially forgive Erestor. It was tough, but he's so lovable when he's not being a jerk. He's the closest to bumbling as I've ever seen an elf.
Forgam was very well written-he was a very Tolkien-esque character, just perfect.
Have I mentioned lately how much I adore Thranduil? I have? Well, I'll tell you again. I ADORE Thranduil.
I hope you drive goes well, and your job is successful!
p.s. Your opening paragraph was absolutely brilliant. It was perfect.
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Nameerobey
Date2008-06-25
Messagehi shadow! thanks for your kind words and support.

glad you liked the chapters and yes another update should be ready in a few days. not as big, but at least sooner. might have a lead on a VW bus for sale in LA, so pray it's a good one! smilie
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Namea shasow in the dark
Date2008-06-25
Requests?please update soon
MessageI was a big treat when there were three brand new chapters waiting for me to read. I think doing a poll for baby names is a great idea. The three new chapters are great. I hope there will be a new chapter update soon. Good luck on finding a camper van.
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Nameerobey
Date2008-06-19
MessageHi Vicky! i enjoyed reading your comments so much! thank you.

Ah so you caught that! I'm pleased it came through and thought it was a neat idea to have both Legolas' parents essentially doing the same thing Elrond and Legolas do: try to protect the other from some new worrying idea. yes, he should tell them and quick. the twins can't hide in the woods by their house forever. fireworks is right! wait till you see what finally draws them from cover.smilie

ok, i promise to resolve the Elured and Elurin scenario. you're right, Elrond deserves to know.

about how much legolas has changed: i think the initial shock was experienced when they first encountered him and we didn't get to see that, so i am putting it in a little here and there. hopefully, legolas can come to terms with this himself, for we haven't yet looked at this from where he stands. that is upcoming very soon.

i think legolas was tempted to do just that for a minute or two! but he doesn't know the twins all that well. they are still coasting on the newness of the bond they've consummated. what he shares with elrond has already lasted beyond that initial euphoria. i know, i haven't really talked much about how that works so i will try to have legolas bring it up so we can take a look at that. with his personality, he's bound to feel guilty about how well things are working out with the twins.

so glad the house was a hit! it's my favourite too. thanks again! smilie
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NameVicky
Date2008-06-19
MessageJust some more thoughts now I've had chance to read through the new chapters again...

It didn't register before that both Thranduil and Rhûn'waew have already detected Legolas' bond with the Twins - they just haven't worked out what it is they are sensing. I hope Legolas has the sense to explain before they figure it out, but I don't have a great deal of confidence that he will. I can't wait for the fireworks!

I also want to know about Elured and Elurin. Rhûn'waew is obviously holding something back there, but that seems unfair, considering they are Elrond's uncles. I hope you'll reveal their fate soon.

Seeing Legolas through his parents' eyes is rather poignant. Although Thranduil exaggerated the case to test Elrond, for the first time we're able to see just how his injuries, followed by the years of Legolas feeling he was no more than Elrond's bond slave affected him. I like the fact that we're seeing flashes of the 'true' Legolas, although it seems Elrond still needs time to adjust!

The Twins' house is still my favourite bit of the new chapters. I want one! If I was Legolas, I'd be sorely tempted to leave Elrond and move in permanently with them smilie
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Nameerobey
Date2008-06-19
MessageThanks Dawn! Glad you enjoyed the update and I promise a fitting finish to Aras shenanigans. he's such a dweeb, but i will at least give him some viable reason for his grousing, though it will be mighty slim at that. he's just mean, but somebody has to be.we need somebody to kick and hard for all legolas and elrond have gone through to get to this point. oh yes, the twins and thranduil are going to be a volatile combination. we'll see if they have inherited their Adar's gift for diplomacy and tact. thanks again! smilie
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NameDawn
Date2008-06-18
MessageA triple feature, wheee. Can I throw Aras into the dungeon, perhaps kick him when he's down? Don't know where that scroll went, but I might have a few ideas. Can't wait til the twins met Thranduil (I got the cameras rolling for that scene). Waiting patiently for the next round of delicious chapters.
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