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| Date | 2009-03-26 |
| Message | Galad-in-elin, i love that you are using the guestbook  But you can always write to me at me email: [email protected] and i will reply. i love these ideas and they make perfect sense, especially the part about Elrond taking the opportunity to prove he is not going to punish Legolas for the triple bond - very important because he has been taking his resentment out on his new love terribly up to now. So i like that scenario and plan to incorporate the navel decoration and the nipple studs. (he can take them out when the pregnancy makes him too tender) I have figured out the perfect way to work it into the story - you will love it  i also appreciate your thoughts on this pairing and why it works here. i agree with you, Legolas is exactly what Elrond needed. Now i have to work on Elrond so that he can be exactly what Legolas needs, too. you're the best  thank you so much for all this great stuff. it is so nice to meet someone who cares about the stories as much as i do, if not more |
| Date | 2009-03-25 |
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| Message | Or I have another solution. If I continue like this (and I want to share my thoughts with you over most of your works), I'll ruin your Guestbook. Maybe write your e-mail address on mine and I'll send you everything without worrying over overpacking you Guestbook? That seems a good idea to mebut if you think otherwise- it is all right, I'll leave my loooong thoughts here...It is only for your comfort I write this proposition. |
| Date | 2009-03-25 |
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| Message | I have some afterthoughts and I'd like to share them with yout.Aearlinn is so full of things I'd like to point out because they are in some way extraordinary for me...I'll try to write it shorter and make less mistakes-it was all in haste,I'm sorry. 1.I think too that pregnancy is already stressful for Legolas and piercing him will be simply too much-it is not in his nature.However, maybe he'll learn to trust the twins more and some months after pregnancy he'll allow those leaves in navel. And Elrond- I can think of two options. The first-it'll be a surprise for him but he'll soon forget about his anger because such little thing is incredibly sexy and the rest will do Leggy- he knows how to divert an august lord OR it'll be a test for Elrond- can he leave all of the prejudices against Legolas and his bond with the twins and give proof of that unreserved love in allowing the little adornment...2.Shorter- I promised but my thoughts aren't cooperating with that idea.Well,I'd like to say why I like Elrond/Legolas so much. The pair seems a match to me because of what you said-the young, charming and pure lover is doing miracles for an old, bored and troubled soul of high ruler. It is just the play of contrasts-and the contrasts are attracting each other in the beginning, in the end they are complementary... I also like the idea of the same begetting day-maybe you'll make some party on that day? Well, I have more afterthoughts but maybe I' ll send them later?Long already... |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
| Message | oh, Golden Dreams. i got mixed up. Yes that one is confusing and the next chapter clears most of it up. Basically, Legolas' mom drugged Elrond and sent him a tricky dream to see where his heart really lies. i got side-tracked doing these other stories. I will get back to it soon. oh, i love the jewelry and piercing if those are foolish fantasies, then i am very very foolish too i am just worried about Legolas going through it right now. Would Elrond allow it, knowing the Twins want it, or would he be threatened? The Twins want it, I am not sure if Legolas would. I have not made up my mind, so your support for it is appreciated. I want to do it but the question is the timing. do you think Legolas would be willing now, with the pregnancy advancing? I will think on it, too. If I can figure out a way that is believable to me, it shall be done. I love the idea of the little green leaves in the navel. need to go review my notes again. you have not messed anything up i am overjoyed with your thoughts and how much you love the characters. you said so many lovely things and gave me so many compliments I am overwhelmed and so happy. Next update is absolutely dedicated to you, my friend. |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
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| Message | I thank you so much that you appreciate my words!I just wanted to add ,that the scene with Arwen's spell is perfectly clear for me- it is just thechapter titled ,,Golden dreams" (which is the last) that got me confused because it begins and ends the same way and for me it is unfinished- ends so abruptly... And if the whole idea of jewllery doesn't suit you- don't worry! I said that those are my sometimes foolish fantasies. However, if you only give him that something from little, green leaves in navel- that would completely content me and probably won't hurt Legolas... Oh well, it's your story, I have already messed everything but that's my nature- I have to say everything that I think or I'll explode. Thank you again for enduring my talk and even more so for answering with so much care. |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
| Message | Galad-in-elin, how could all these wonderful words you've given me be boring??? I am very grateful and am devouring every word. I didn't make it plain, Shadowess owns the Slashfiction.net site and that's why it's so neat you found me there, with the first person who showed me support. well,that last update. I'll have to take a closer look. In truth it was probably more like two or three updates crammed together. Basically what is going on is Arwen comes home - so right away it is confusing because we moved backwards in time from the point where Elrond and Legolas are in the forest getting ready for the sylvan wedding. Arwen, jealous and upset because no one told her about the pregnancy, wants to get inside Legolas' mind and understand why he would do such an immoral thing. she is thinking now like the others used to think, that he is using the pregnancy to force Elrond to marry him. So she makes this spell, with Mithrandir's help, and lives through those first few months of Legolas' captivity in Imladris. Mithrandir was there to protect Legolas from knowing someone was messing around in his past life, which would frighten him. This I wrote because people wanted to know how bad it was for Legolas. Me, not wanting to make the tale dark, left it all out from the beginning, starting the story after ten years had passed already. I'm sorry it was confusing.If I get time I will see what I can do to make it better. Thank you again! More Aearlinn soon (May) |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
| Message | I couldn't face another dark story, so then it evolved into something silly and funny, and that was too absurd. So then it ended upright in the middle. Some funny things, some sad things, some hot sex. It works for me and I am ecstatic that it works for you. Thank you for all these compliments about the writing. I do pour much into the stories and while they are not perfect the details are important to me. So the comb, the Ened Ethuil ceremony, the pole vaulting, those are the things that make the story real for me and the things that make Legolas an endless attraction for Elrond,who is tired and bored with life by this time. I promise,he will be better for Legolas in future. Your requests: Wow,that's a lot! The chains and piercings - can't promise but we'll see. Epilogue maybe? Sexy clothes? we are already heading that way Some provocative 'honeymoon' clothes for after the wedding are in the works already. Pregnancy clothes and Legolas' reaction to his changing body also planned and ready for typing, so got you covered there. We haven't seen Elrond move into action on building the nesting talan, but we will. Action with the twins - you bet Ah, you are the 2nd person to remember that bit about Galdor, which encourages me because I do have plans to use that. I was worried folks might forget, it was such a short reference. I cannot promise it will be written exactly as you describe but I can promise Elrond gets to be the hero for once - continued |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
| Message | Galad-in-elin: I do not know what to say This is incredible. Thank you so much for this feedback. I will try to answer as best I can, but you have so many kind things my mind is reeling. To start: it is fantstic to me that you found me over on Slashfiction.net first, because it was on Shadowess' group, Legolas in Chains, that I posted my very first chapter of anything. That was a long time ago! But it pleases me that you love Aearlinn best and your reasons make me all warm and glad inside. Yes, Olpathu was my idea. i guess i think about what that is like, to be able to live a waking dream that both refreshes the body and mind while permitting someone to carry on. So that is how I decided it would be for my elves. All the sylvan traditions and customs have been building in my mind over time. As you can tell i love the Wood Elves and always felt their culture must be very different from other elves, especially Noldorin elves. On top of that, I was challenged by someone who prefers Elrond/Legolas,while to me it seemed an unlikely pairing, precisely because of those differences. Why would either one want the other, beyond base physical attraction? Voila! sylvan bond of extremity to the rescue. Now, how to make them fall in love? Well, make Legolas adorably fascinating to the old elf, of course, and so all those little quirks of his started to come forth. Believe it or not, Aearlinn was originally a dark tale, but Feud had me so weighed down - continued |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
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| Message | I hope I'm not boring but I want to write everything that lies on my heart concerning Aearlinn. So,just some requests and suggestions that are my subjective whims and you,of course,don't have to bother about them.Nevertheless,I'd like to see at least some of them dealt with later in the story:In chapter 13(Mereth od Ened Ethuil)the twins were talking about jewellery that could adorn Legolas'body(piercings, chains, etc.)Well,I'd like to see Legolas having them...Or at least those in nipples and navel.Oh,beautiful! I truly appreciate Legolas'chastity and humbleness but I'd like him to get some nice, provocative clothes in which he could flaunt at least only before Elrond.Plus hot scene,of course...I love the way you write them!And I like the way you write Legolas as a temptingly erotic warrior,too-my Leggy obsession flares! And,that is,I think,most whimsical whim- I'd like Galdor to realise that Legolas survived and arrive to Imladris to lay claims for him and getting charmed with our sylvan's obvious beauty. some jealous action,attempt of non-con(though I can't see good Galdor-from Cuthenin-in that role)and of course Elrond as a hero! And some smaller requests-Legolas'progress during pregnancy,getting toys for child and new,soft clothes for himself,some interaction with twins, more care from Elrond... There's only one thing I can't grasp in the whole story-the last chapter.It's quite confusing,the end specifically.Maybe you'll rewrite it?Thanks for patience-that was long! |
| Date | 2009-03-24 |
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| Message | Well, that was a nice cliff-hanger, wasn't it? And you may be a wordy writer but I am a wordy reviewer!  ...and then I returned to Aearlinn. I thought:,,I may not like this story but the author had to work hard on it- it is long and wel-written. And if only beacuse of that, you should give it ago." And so I read it studiously, too studiously- so much that I've fallen in love with it. I have noticed little details that work well with the entirety, I found the doting attention of the writer who thinks before writes. I will always say: the smallest details decide on whether the fic is good or not good. And I'll tell you what it is: the interesting take on Olpathu (is it your idea?), the elvish words carefully used so that they really mean what they mean, and, which is my favourite- all the Silvan traditions! Ened ethuil, pole vaulting, quite erotic comb , candied rose buds... And I like a little bit of humour you're inserting- like the Aragorn's incredulity about Legolas making frog noises and the serenity over the topic of the elves telling him about it. I adore Legolas above everything and so I like it that you make Elrond still better and better (but still not good enough, well, here's my protectiveness over Leggy), that he found accord with the twins and that Erestor and Lindir (though I like them together and I laughed abot Erestor running naked) are not geting too much screen-time in the main story (I love it when there's much of Legolas). Just one more review |
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