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Name	Naledi
Date	2011-09-02
Message	Oh this was dark. I found it a struggle to read, but your writing, powerful as ever, carried me through. Lindalcon's death was doubly tragic, coming as it did from Legolas. If Legolas survives this, I hope he'll be able to comfort himself with the thought that he saved Lindalcon from a far worse fate. The crude 'bonding' with the wraith was even more horrific. Legolas' bond with Berenaur was one of the few good things that had happened to Legolas. I sincerely hope whatever spells the wraith has cast on him can be undone and that the bond with Berenaur is still intact. Despite the darkness of this tale, I'm still gripped by it. I hope there will be an eventual happy end.

Private Message added 2011-08-31

Name	Audreen
Date	2011-08-27
Message	Hi Audreen, yes, this is a very tough part of the story to get through. There is no way for this story to become light at this point. The story from the beginning has been dark angst and it will be so right to the end. i knew Lindalcon's death would be difficult for all to read. stop reading for a while, wait for the finish, then read what you can. i understand and appreciate you trying to get through it, but stick with Aearlinn for a little while, or Legolas and the Balrog. As for ending the suffering one way or another, i'm working on it.

Name	Audreen
Date	2011-08-27
Location
Your Favourite Story	was Feud now I like Aearlinn
Requests?	let the suffering end one way or the other
How did you find me?	long time follower
Message	This chapter was really well written in that I got really emotional beause I have come to care deeply about your characters. But it was really hard for me to read and I actually skipped over entire chunks. All this unrelenting angst is a real downer for me. I have to hold onto the belief that things will get better but I am starting to lose hope.

Name	erobey
Date	2011-08-18
Message	hi ebbingnight thank you, it is hard to do it. i'm trying to make it follow the pattern set it motion so long ago. At the same time, these chapters have taken a long time to get here for a reason - and i am glad you see there was a struggle for Legolas to follow through, knowing what would happen to him and the burden he would carry until his end. i know it seems hopeless, but there is a way to get him out,though not an easy way and not without much suffering for all involved. saw your second note, and it shall be done. yes, their selfishness has had repercussions neither even considered. such is the nature of selfishness. it is all about various efforts to gain power and control, and strangely, to be loved. Thranduil wanted his father's love and settled for control over what remained of his father's kingdom. And Elrond wanted Gil-galad's love, settled for a Ring of Power, Celebrian, Ningloriel, and vengeance. In pursuing their ends, neither cared who was hurt or acknowledged the pieces of their own souls they were destroying along with these innocents. thanks so much for the feedback.

Name	ebbingnight
Date	2011-08-18
Location
Your Favourite Story	Aerlinn by day, Feud by night
Message	And I wish that both Elrond and Thranduil were able to see the extremities to which their "feud" has brought to a brave youngster who has died far too soon, and to the Tawarwaith who has suffered far too much!!! Both largely because of Elrond's and Thranduil's actions and inactions have done!!!

Name	ebbingnight
Date	2011-08-18
Location
Your Favourite Story	Aerlinn by day, Feud by night
Message	I truly admire your willingness to follow the dark logic of this story where it needs to go. Not many writers would have the courage (or the skill to take us along with them) needed to do this. If Legolas is willing to rescue his young "brother" at this tremendous cost, the least we can do is to go with him into this long darkness, where neither ghosts nor wizards (let alone mortal or immortal friends and companions) can find or help him. I am hoping that the Tawarwaith is strong enough to survive, though I'm not sure that Legolas himself is.

Name	erobey
Date	2011-08-15
Message	Hi Hathor oh no need to apologise, ever i'm glad the exams are done but the news about your dad's illness is worrisome. hope all these family concerns relent soon. well, this chapter of feud you may not like so much. i haven't even announced it anywhere because it is a pretty cruel cliffhanger. i am doing ok and writing today so trying to get through this section of the story so everyone can breathe easier. thanks for the good thoughts and well wishes

Name	Hathor
Date	2011-08-14
Location
Requests?	as usual: STAY AWEZOME!
How did you find me?	followed your awesome light!
Message	I'M HOME, LUCYYYY! NYAHAHAHA! I am back, my dear...! Yeah, exams are over...(been over for two weeks hides) though I do apologize for the absence, I've been a bit sick and my dad was diagnosed with diabetes and some stuff with my sister taking place so yeah, it's been pretty hectic! I shall now walk over to Feud and start nomming it...err....reading it (again...for the...nth time now xD). To be honest, it's kinda weird for me to read right now, because I seem to have developed an insatiable love for the Glorfindel/Erestor pairing...so to see Erestor with someone else is kinda uncomfy... BUT! I love Feud. I LOVE that story...so I shall go start on it right away. I HOPE YOU'RE OKAY AND THAT YOU ARE BEING AWESOME AS USUAL! (I am hyper, yes) gives cookies

Name	Tanya
Date	2011-08-13
Location
Your Favourite Story	all
Requests?	update
Message	Well, I love all your stories (something more, few less), I'm your loyal fan for many years from beginning of Feud, it's just 'caus last chapter Feud was so dark, I'm wanted to read something nice, and your litle Legolas is so adorable and sunny. And I'm very glad about help for Legolas, though it's scary, reading about bonding Legolas and Nazgul. But 'm so hope the ending of Feud will be happy Thank you for your interesting and enjoyable stories

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