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Name	erobey
Date	2012-02-05
Message	Hi Stef no need to apologise, i understood what you said and i thank you for the many kind words. i am envious of your ipad even if the typing interface is annoying yes, Legolas' childhood in Feud had to be terrible, and the worst part about it is that he grew up adapted to that kind of life. he really had no chance to form a different set of coping skills and the kinks and flaws in his character are minor compared to that of those adults who treated him this way. thank you again and hope all is well for you and your family

Name	Stef
Date	2012-02-05
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Message	Sorry for the idiotic comment, never going to write a comment on iPad again (or at least until it is set on Italian!)

Name	Stef
Date	2012-02-05
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Message	Loved the Feud out take, it is so in tu.ne with the story and it is heartbreaking to sede so young a chili al really so aware of his condition and so desiderous to cha Gesù things and male adults recognise his worth. Thank you!

Name	erobey
Date	2012-02-03
Message	Hi ebbingnight Oh thank you for reading and sending me such terrific support! Theres a heaven awaiting folks who are so loyal very important to me and holds me up. I, too, thought all this was too much to endure reading about a very young Legolas, but it c does help us now to look back and see exactly how Legolas came to be as he is when we do meet him. Imagine that everyone you loved treated you as though your only purpose was as a convenient place to dump all misery and frustration , dismissed and scorned on every hand. Thank you again

Name	ebbingnight
Date	2012-02-03
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Your Favourite Story	Aerlinn by day, Feud by night
Message	"Antala Kwinga" bonus chapter What Naledi said!!! I am so glad that you didn't start Feud with these early days, since I'm not sure that readers could bear it: by the time we meet Legolas in Feud, at least he's an adult. The idea of having to watch this adorable elfling actually go through what we already know he will have to in order to reach the current chapter of Feud breaks my heart. But this piece is beautiful on its own, knowing the future as we do but also seeing all the might-have-beens and should-have-beens here. Thank you for remembering and sharing this "out-take"!

Name	erobey
Date	2012-02-03
Message	Hi Naledi Thank you for thinking of me and for this superlative feedback I'm ok and hope you are coping too. i can always count on you to find the theme I was going for the chapter detailing malthen's death was all about the contrast between him and legolas - how each handled Judgement, how each handled shame and public humiliation. Both doomed from birth to a life of menial service, unable to love and be loved in return. We see that Malthen is selfish even when he most cares for Legolas - wishing he was his father, yet knowing his son could only carry on his shame. So he relishes the fact Legolas loves him, but does not really care what that love means for Legolas. So I find it hard to forgive him even now. Thank you for noting that Legolas stayed true to himself. How much more admirable that self than Malthen's character, for Malthen also remained true to his underlying bitterness and resentment. Thank you again and I hope to make better progress soon

Name	Naledi
Date	2012-02-03
Message	I was only wondering the other day if you were okay, so I was very glad to see this Feud outtake. This was a poignant piece - Malthen is so understanding and sympathetic towards Legolas here, but of course I couldn't read it without remembering what he becomes. Maybe the seeds of his future are being sown in his hopeless love for Ningloriel. After all, he's not blind to her indifference towards Legolas, and the effect that has on Legolas, and yet he continues to love her. It's sad to read about how unloved Legolas is. Of course, we know that from the rest of Feud, but somehow seeing how he was aware of that even at such a young age is terribly sad. This is actually a very interesting comparison between the two characters. Malthen's unrequited love eventually twists him, but Legolas, despite being denied love, remains true to himself. The way he comports himself at the bow giving ceremony. What a brilliant idea, to leave an arrow under the tree! Thanks for sharing this. I hope we'll see another Feud update soon.

Name	erobey
Date	2012-02-02
Message	hi Dee Thank You I am truly grateful for your many kind words and compliments - they mean everything when life is dark and menacing. Yes, I am trying to catch feud up to date over on ff.net,but it is slow going. These latest chapters of feud have been difficult to write and to read, i think. Perhaps the very worst was Lindalcon's death, though Legolas' suffering was nothing to sniff at either. but i think, for Legolas, the fact that he died by Legolas' hand is going to be the most difficult thing for him to overcome as he tries to recover from this horror. There will be help for him from some unexpected sources, perhaps. I like your thoughts on the entity that ensnared Legolas so cleverly,imitating Mithrandir. Saruman has never met Legolas, true, so to evaluate his candidacy as evil villain we must explore possible ways in which he could have learned of him, if any. yes, maybe i am being too much all mysterious but i just cannot help myself, as no one else has mentioned Saruman kudos to you for that thank you for the Love, i am greedily absorbing it right now. I have been working hard on the feud update, but just not sure how deep to go at this point, so i keep trying things to see how it reads. i will have it whittled down correctly before too long, i hope. thank you again for such strong support and Love and sending it back magnified a thousand-fold

Name	Dee
Date	2012-01-31
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Your Favourite Story	Soooo Many ;p
Requests?	More updates. Please ;p
How did you find me?	You're Bookmarked on my toolbar!
Message	After receiving a story alert for Feud on FanFiction.net I mosey-on-over to this site and re-read the story here as more chapters are uploaded. Just wanted to say again that you are an absolutely amazing writer. There is so much depth in each & every chapter. The last few chapters (Legolas' capture & then the death of our other dear one]made my (to use one of your phrases] "soul cringe". Pretty powerful stuff & ref. your asking us to guess who is the entity behind the white door.. well it't a toss up between Saurman [but, when would he have met Legolas??] or Sauron [he's more likely as he controls the orcs & wraiths} Well, as I await the next chapter updates I guess I will just go and enjoy re-reading some of your other works in the meantime. ~Sending U Much Love, ~Write-On!

Name	erobey
Date	2012-01-17
Message	No Worries, Stefanie i don't know when i'll get back to fractured light, but i'll try.

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