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| Date | 03-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Mercy -- by Flirt |
| Message | You describe the detailed action extremely well. I felt, though, that you needed to fill out your characters more and, perhaps, enclose your words inside of a bigger plot idea. Then your story line would lead to the action you describe so vividly. I like your writing-- you just need to fill it out a bit more, giving your story a smoother flow and a fuller perspective. |
| Date | 03-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Gayla--part1 by phantomsilk |
| Message | Your fascinating, detailed plot wraps up the reader in an intriguing, new and exciting world. Your characters are vivid and original. I can't wait to see what happens in your next installment. I hope it comes soon. |
| Date | 03-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Her Heart's Desire by Aphrodite |
| Message | A super introduction to the mingling of restraint, pain and pleasure. Excellent descriptions connect the action, making the reader feel he is there, in the room. The twist at the end was well-handled. Perhaps we will be treated to a second encounter with these characters? |
| Date | 03-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | New Years Party by Bella |
| Message | What a terrific story! I love how the present tense is used to give real immediacy to your action. The scene is so romantic, and your characters go so well together. I could just imagine them, out on the balcony, orgasming as the fireworks explode. |
| Date | 02-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | I Wasn't Quite Expecting That by British Gent |
| Message | A scorching, really well written piece. Full of twists, turns and surprises just the way reality lays them out. The style puts you right there glued to the story line. Great stuff. |
| Date | 02-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | My Special Angie by peppercorn |
| Message | A sweet, hot little story that is easy to read and love. The special terms and turns of phrase make this a special bit of writing too.  |
| Date | 19-Dec-2009 |
| Story | A Naughty Christmas Wish by sweet_p |
| Message | Oh my what a Christmas wish, showing the trust you need between to people. I loved your descriptions sweetp and like Saff it took me in as if I was there.  |
| Date | 19-Dec-2009 |
| Story | A Very Special Holiday by peppercorn |
| Message | Like sweet p I also laughed with Melissas quirky comment about Charlie. I thought Melissa would be alone for Christmas, something I can relate to feeling but thankfully no. A beautifully written tale. |
| Date | 19-Dec-2009 |
| Story | Driving Home for Christmas by Saffron |
| Message | Saffy once more you create a powerful story with vivid descriptions. I laughed for real at the situation with the duvet, thinking to myself that would be me. Wonderful story of the need for a husband and wife, who have been apart to be together and not disturbed. Such talent from a wonderful lady, who is my friend. |
| Date | 19-Dec-2009 |
| Story | Christmas Eve by Jaquesgerard52 |
| Message | I just simply loved this, how erotic. Showing that every part of our bodies holds the key to great sexual feelings. Write more for us Jaques |
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