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| Date | 10-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Vacation Deviation by his_response |
| Message | Mmmm... Juicy! |
| Date | 09-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Jackie and Kate |
| Message | Wow- this story is exciting! The author builds the sexual content over three scenes, each better than the next. The writing is very realistic and creative. I am looking forward to reading more DesertWolfAZ stories. |
| Date | 08-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | A Chance meeting |
| Message | Bravo Saffron! Good story, quite easily believable. |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Her Heart's Desire |
| Message | Very nice effort, I enjoyed it very much. |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Gayla ~ Part 1 by phantomsilk |
| Message | A magnificent beginning to a fateful love story. Very intriguing and written by someone who knows her creole history. With all due respect to other authors whose work I am enamored of, it has been a while since I have read something of this quality. My compliments. |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Mercy by Flirt |
| Message | A hot and quick read. Nicely worded and written. Nice work Flirt! |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Mercy ~ Flirt |
| Message | That was a very hot piece of writing and I would have to agree with pepper and similarly with Aphrodite's story, I would have liked to have been aware of the bigger picture that got the couples together but that is just personal preference. You have a great talent, flirt, look forward to reading more or developing this piece of erotica.  |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
| Story | New Years Party ~ Bella |
| Message | Bella, you never fail us with the sensitive handling of your characters and teasing erotica and this is no exception! Your writing is a delightful tale of romance from beginning to end. I would say be careful of the unnecessary use of Capitalistion of words and when you think you have edited and proof read enough do it at least twice more. This is an aside as your writing is charming - thank you for sharing. |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Gayla - Part 1 ~ Phantomsilk |
| Message | It is a pleasure to have such great writing on R~SVP so firstly thank you! Your writing skills are excellent your plot and character development are faultless - I was engrossed the minute Gayla was in the back of the car with her blanket wondering where this was going to take us. What a fabulous mind you have and I too can't wait to see what else is in store! |
| Date | 04-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Her Heart's desire ~ by Aphrodite |
| Message | For a first attempt at writing erotica I think you have done very well. I did feel that I have come into a piece of writing that was part of a bigger picture and my preference and only my preference, is I would rather see characters with names. Although of course this does not detract from the erotica itself, I just find the characters more complete and therefore engrose myself in the scenario more. From a writing technique, this would also allow you to use the character's name in your sentence structure so you don't just use 'He....'or 'She..' That said, your erotica is hot and I can see lots more on the horizon - bravo it was a good first piece of erotic writing! |
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