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Namepeppercorn
Date13-Jan-2010
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StoryChocolate with Sophie by Aahlu
MessageI was so taken with your wording and imagery! You created a marvelous series of verbal meanderings that carried my imagination along with yours. I so enjoyed going along for the ride!
You have elevated the mundane and enriched the world.

smilie smilie smilie


NameEve's Angel
Date12-Jan-2010
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StoryDress rehearsel
MessageI liked the story- very unique and the idea of doing something in front of others and yet no one knows, is exciting.

The punctuation didn't bother me although I can see what others mean in that the flow is different. I thought it was an interesting use of punctuation and a good example of how it changes a story and the reader's experience of it.

I liked the experiment of using more punctuation to add effect. It was a very fun read and the erotica was well done.


NameEve's Angel
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryGuy's Night
MessageThis might be the hottest thing I have ever read. I have never read guy-on-guy before. The author does an excellent job of keeping it real by not getting too flowery in the wording, thus making it feel like it could be a real interaction between two male friends.

And the details of the sex are very visual and exciting.
This story is incredibly exciting.


NameAahlu
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryShopping trip
MessageWhat better reason could you have for buying lingerie, if you needed a reason at all. What happens when you go shopping for vegetables? smilie smilie


NameAahlu
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryDress rehersal
MessageJolly good show! AmDram can be a lot like that at times!


NameAahlu
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryGayla part two
MessageOoooh all this BDSM get complicated doesnt it? Interesting reading and thoughts provoking.....wonder if I might try it for myself?


NameAahlu
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryGuys Night
MessageAs a Bi man I loved this story and can identify with it so easily! The old joke brought back memories too! I am pleased to see m/m stories included here as I have a couple of my own in the cupboard which I shall now bring out and give an airing here.


NameFlirt
Date11-Jan-2010
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StoryGuy's Night
MessageAmazing story, Q. I loved it from start to finish.


NameSaffron
Date11-Jan-2010
StoryGayla ~ Part II ~ by Phantomsilk
MessageA subject matter that I have little interest in and nil knowledge but I am riveted to your words! You allow us to be Gayla and experience every ounce of her journey.


NameSaffron
Date11-Jan-2010
StoryChocolate with Sophie. ~ by Aahlu
MessageA charming piece with good visual language. I loved the 'voice' that told the tale and the rough blanket against bare bum! Thanks for sharing your words, I look forward to reading more from you. ~~~~~~~~ Remember to proof read smilie


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