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Name	Aahlu
Date	18-Jan-2010
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Story	Happiness is a Househusband.
Message	Hooray for househusbands! I like the story but do think he would have been a lot more trouble than that!

Name	Aahlu
Date	18-Jan-2010
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Story	Jackie at the Theatre
Message	Nice situation to be in! I ejoyed reading this - thank you for posting.

Name	Aahlu
Date	18-Jan-2010
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Story	Lorraine's Coming out
Message	A good story with the potential for a sequel. Those two still have much to explore!

Name	Vivienne
Date	17-Jan-2010
Story	Chocolate with Sophie by Aahlu
Message	Beautifully written, you set a scene with no use of the typical language we would normally see in erotica. I loved this!

Name	his_response
Date	16-Jan-2010
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Story	Her Heart's Desire
Message	Excellently written! Grammar and sentence structure were top notch, your descriptions and word usage -very- good, and I didn't see any redundant word use! The story built at a good pace, was very erotic, and very believable! Kudos!! Critique: Okay, I think there is perhaps one or two very minor punctuation typos, but otherwise this story is word perfect!

Name	his_response
Date	16-Jan-2010
Location
Story	Shopping Trip
Message	VERY good!!! Nicely paced, excellent descriptions as the story unfolded, and everything flowed in a natural progression. Had me on edge by the end! Very sexy!!! VERY MINOR critique: An instance or two of 'to' used where 'too' would have been the word... Loved this story, though!!!

Name	his_response
Date	16-Jan-2010
Location
Story	New Years Party
Message	Nice imagery, and good story progression. Very erotic!!! (You had me very aroused!) Keep up the great work!! Critique: The story could use another proof-read; there was a word missing here or there, etc.

Name	Simon
Date	15-Jan-2010
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Story	Shopping Trip by Bella
Message	This is well written and very hot. Nice plot from a naughty mind. Mehr bitte schoen!

Name	Gayle Silk
Date	15-Jan-2010
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Story	Rehearsal
Message	Sheesh I found myself holding my breath reading your story. Very well done, great imagination and what are you doing tonight

Name	Simon
Date	15-Jan-2010
Location
Story	Dress Rehearsal by his_response
Message	Oh this was a naughty little number indeed! Definitely well written, with a Pagliacci kind of twist.

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