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| Date | 10-Apr-2010 |
| Location |  |
| Story | The Making of the Amulet |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | Hmmm---Lens and Light and Leuwenhoek and a peering into the microcosm of one's soul so that we can find a way to ward off the draining of who we are by society's fears and intolerances. How extremely brilliant of you. So perceptive and expressive! One wonders if the magic of the amulet does not necessarily bring out one or the other, but allows the enjoyment of two worlds at once. Why in life does one always have to make a choice? Why is it always expected of us? Cannot we choose, instead, to enjoy all experiences that life has to offer, on all 'sides' of a round world? Is not life an expression of all of its experiences, after all? Why must our world expect black or white, when the world is best enjoyed as a burst of color. I loved this story. It was inspirational. |
| Date | 26-Mar-2010 |
| Location |  |
| Story | Her Hearts Desire |
| Author | Aphrodite |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | This is the first BDSM story I have actually read in full. although I have scanned BDSM stories on other sites. There is something about the story that grabs you with its reality. I could see all the action and felt the excitement. I was impressed at the tenderness of the man, who showed an understanding of his sub's fears but also of her needs. F From what I understood of BDSM(perhaps eroneously) I was expecting much rougher treatment to be given by the man,but as the story developed I felt empathy with him and could see myself in his place, although quite inexperienced in this area. The tenderness between them was quite noticeable The sex was very graphic and arousing, and I assume it was written for that purpose. It certainly worked on me. Thanks Aphrodite you have opened up an new area of sexuality, which obviously is enjoyed by those who participate.  |
| Date | 18-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | After Dinner Delight |
| Author | Bella |
| Rate 1~5 | 3.7 |
| Message | I would have liked to have seen the story rounded out a little with a bit more interaction between the characters before they went home to have sex. Perhaps they might have chatted over one of their dinner courses. Maybe they could have shared a forkful of food, watching each other chew the morsel, hinting at things to come. Either way, the descriptions were wonderful, giving much good detail of the action. Your words expertly conveyed both the tenderness of the moment and the urgency felt by both of them. You describe your scene well and seem to have no trouble creating a vivid image in your reader's mind. Your words were hot and I felt the connection between your characters. |
| Date | 13-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Shoe Whore |
| Author | GiCWrites |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | I really enjoyed reading this! I am glad Aahlu reviewed it so I discovered it. I could really relate to the female character and your descriptions made vivid pictures I could see and feel as I read. I was wanting to read more about them as the story ended. They are great characters if you want to write more about them. |
| Date | 10-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Just Sophie |
| Author | Saffron |
| Rate 1~5 | 5+ |
| Message | This review is based only on a visual reading of this piece of work. In a shift from previous writing, Saffron takes on a very "cinema noir" type of style. It is all very real, very dramatic, over full of twists and paradoxes. The result is that this story is not only a whole new style I do not see in the field of erotic literature often but it reads like an extended dime novel into which we only get a glimpse. The joy, the passion and the eroticism is scorching hot. Anyone can see that in the ending scene so full of acts and phrases that singe the eyebrows. But the depth of Sophia's drama is right there from the start, and its necessity is declared as a paradox at the end. It was in the stars it seems. I could read stories like this all day. |
| Date | 09-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Her Heart's Desire |
| Author | Aphrodite |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | I do not pretend to understand BDSM, but I didn't need to in order to feel the intensity of this piece. Both her feeling of need and his careful fulfillment of that need were very well written. I feel a passion in this piece that is relatively rare in most erotic writing I have read. The pictures you painted were excellent. I found myself "seeing" as I read more than interpreting the words. Nice job. I hope you write more, both for my enjoyment and also for my understanding. |
| Date | 09-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Love Lives In Lincoln |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | A very powerful piece of writing with wonderful imagery and use of metaphor. I liked how you touched on the way we communicate or, in fact, fail to effectively communicate with one another. Be it in person or online, it is sometimes the things which aren't said that hold meaning for us. Our time on earth is fleeting, and how we choose to experience it, or how we use the little time we have, holds more meaning in our lives than others can comprehend. Your story shows its allowable emotional boundaries, testing and tempting, but ultimately realizing what must be, to keep things on an even keel. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| Date | 09-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Smoothly |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 4 |
| Message | I would have liked this to be a bit longer. I enjoyed the description but was hoping you might have lingered a bit more with the detail of the shaving. Perhaps we could have seen a few more of her thoughts as she was preparing herself to go dancing. Overall it was very enjoyable, and I wondered if there will be more to continue this story or not. Great imagery! It worked well on many levels. |
| Date | 09-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | The Museum -- Part 1 |
| Author | British Gent |
| Rate 1~5 | 4 |
| Message | Overall I enjoyed this installment of the story. It is well written and interesting. The character is intriguing but I did have a problem with her laying on the restroom floor to masturb***te. ( The program does not allow me to type that word!) I can't imagine anyone doing that, even the sexually desperate. Perhaps that is just the way I think, but it somehow lessened the moment for me. I look forward to the rest of this story and am anxious to see what adventures may be in store for Maria. |
| Date | 09-Mar-2010 |
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| Story | Computer Repairs |
| Author | Gina Kincade |
| Rate 1~5 | 4 |
| Message | This was a super-hot story, well described and thought through. The sex was so detailed, the reader could feel each moment in time with your characters. I like that you gave plenty of physical description and led up to your action without ever listing features, as is sometimes done in other stories. You have quite a talent for writing, and I look forward to reading more stories from you. |
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