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| Date | 25-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Lullaby -- by Flirt |
| Message | Incredibly well written story filled with closeness, beauty and passion. Your original choice of words sets the romantic tone of your story. I loved your use of descriptive and evocative phrases. A great job of writing. I enjoyed reading this one a lot. Thanks. |
| Date | 25-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | The Lesson -- by His_response |
| Message | An inspired piece of writing from a very talented writer. Great scenic description of the action in the water, and a masterful telling of the action, once on land. Vivid and powerful, with a bit of humor at the end. In all a delightful story to read. Thanks, Q! |
| Date | 25-Jan-2010 |
| Story | God the Snowdrifts by Aahlu |
| Message | Aahlu once again I have enjoyed your words. I have to say I laughed when reading it too, the poor woman all worked up and let down by batteries...Classic! |
| Date | 21-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Gayla ~ Part III by phantomsilk |
| Message | This is, IMHO, professional level writing. It is truly gripping and real to the reader. This is a writer with no small talent and I am sure will not find the high end of her writing and soulful skills soon!! |
| Date | 21-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Life In The Middle Lane -- 1 & 2 by Aahlu |
| Message | Quite a scenic and original romp in the countryside! I loved your characters, with their spunk and innovation. They have quite the unusual but lovable personalities! I thoroughly enjoyed both of your superbly written installments. |
| Date | 21-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | One special summer |
| Message | A most enjoyable "first time" story with plenty of background and a happy, ongoing, ending. |
| Date | 21-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | The Prize |
| Message | A familair and recognisable scene with a lot going on as there always is in this type of story. Most enjoyable and thought provoking. |
| Date | 19-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Happiness is a Househusband -- by GICwrites |
| Message | I enjoyed this fascinating take on relationships. You develop your main character very well. I really felt I got to know her. I like your househusband man, but felt I wanted to see a bit more of his own motivations. Other than that, you wrote a cohesive, enjoyable, well-described story. I look forward to reading more of your writing. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Lorraine's Coming Out ~ LaDramaPrincess |
| Message | All I could say when I read this was wow! a fine piece of erotica in its most titillating form. Thank you for allowing us to publish it here. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Gayla ~ Part III by Phantomsilk |
| Message | The subject matter is not really my 'thing' but for anyone interested in BDSM then the finality of this story is incredible. Phantomsilk writes with passionate detail, the journey of Gayla has been emotionally written with good attention to detail and character development ~ Thank you for sharing your story with us - very well written indeed! |
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