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Name	Saffron
Date	27-Jan-2010
Story	Cumbrian Coast 2007 ~ by Aahlu
Message	A well written piece. Thanks for sharing.

Name	Saffron
Date	27-Jan-2010
Story	God the Snowdrifts - by Aahlu
Message	God the voice behind the story was witty, frank and sexy too! I cringed at some of the toys used and I giggled at the great use of metaphors. I enjoy the voice in your work ~ more please!

Name	Simon
Date	26-Jan-2010
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Story	Lullaby by Flirt
Message	Non-stop heat that excites and mesmerizes the reader. The scenario before the mirror is highly effect. This is erotic lit alright.

Name	peppercorn
Date	26-Jan-2010
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Story	Jayne Takes on a New Pupil -- by British Gent
Message	Superbly written and very hot! I loved your characters and the emotional bond formed between the two lovers. Nice job.

Name	peppercorn
Date	26-Jan-2010
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Story	God the Snowdrifts -- by Aahlu
Message	I chuckled with this one. I loved your outlook and descriptions of the trials and tribulations of seeking the perfect masturbatory pleasure. You have quite an imaginative way of looking at life. I enjoyed reading this story. It had a most marvelous tone.

Name	Jacques
Date	26-Jan-2010
Story	Shoe Whore by GiCwrites
Message	I loved this story. It was very sensual and sexy. Your character's were very passionate. I hope you write another story.

Name	Aahlu
Date	25-Jan-2010
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Story	Lullaby by Flirt
Message	I do like the idea of kissing her field of dreams! Nice sexy story, thank you Flirt!

Name	Aahlu
Date	25-Jan-2010
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Story	The Lesson by His_Response.
Message	A lesson indeed! almost felt I could do it myself after that!

Name	Aahlu
Date	25-Jan-2010
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Story	Hot Bubbles by Peppercorn.
Message	Bubbly and steamy as threesomes often are! Lets try one in the shower next?

Name	peppercorn
Date	25-Jan-2010
Location
Story	Shoe Whore -- by GiCwrites
Message	An exceptional story filled with originality and hot passion. I loved your characters and the flow of your telling of the story. Will there be a second part to continue this story? I would love to see some more with these characters.

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