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| Date | 10-Feb-2010 |
| Story | The Making of the Amulet by Aahlu |
| Message | There are so many comments I wish I could make, but they're jumbled, like the imagery, symbolism, and feelings this tale provokes. It seems a personal myth of sorts, born of questions and bitterness, but it's beautiful in its precise observations and self awareness. I'm not sure if this is the beginning of the story or the middle. If it's the end, it's only the end of the writing. The journey appears to be ongoing. I read it twice. It will seem clearer, I'm sure, if I read it again, though not tonight. |
| Date | 10-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Afterglow |
| Message | WOW! This was really hot! I had to read and re read as there was so much to imagine! I loved how it started with him remembering his time with her and then how he woke her up. You can feel the trust they have for each other as the scenes keep changing. Nice job  |
| Date | 10-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | On The Beach |
| Message | Awww this was so sweet and tender. I loved imagining I was on that beach making love as the stars came out. You could really feel the love and adoration they had for each other, and how much they enjoyed pleasing their lover. This was so romantic...my favorite kind of story. |
| Date | 09-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | A Romantic Halloween by Scott Noir |
| Message | Intriguing story of the power of love to bring back love from the past. What better place than at a Halloween bash? Nicely told and well-served story, with just the right amount of heat and passion. Thanks. |
| Date | 09-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Chula's Way |
| Message | I was stunned reading this story! I was not so sure at the beginning, some of the raw emotions of war and killing are not things I enjoy reading but were important to the telling of this incredible story. Thank you for sharing this unique piece! |
| Date | 09-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Mrs. Raymond |
| Message | Very nice, Ravenquill. I enjoyed how sweet and tender this story was. It seemed very real. I enjoyed your pacing of the story and the characters. I would be interested in a story about Liz and her new man, Jim. I will have to look at your other stories. |
| Date | 09-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | The Prize |
| Message | wow! I had to read this three times! There was so much going on and so many new things to absorb! I have not read a story like this...I am in awe at how you can write in so many different styles. What else can we expect from you? |
| Date | 08-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Mrs. Raymond -- by Ravenquill |
| Message | A well-told, moving story about new experiences, need, longing and loneliness. The plot was smooth and the story was described in the tender manner it deserved. Excellent job. |
| Date | 07-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Chula’s Way ~ by Ravenquill |
| Message | Thank you for submitting this story I wasn't sure where it was going to take us but a remarkable piece of writing. |
| Date | 07-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Mrs Raymond ~ by Ravenquill |
| Message | Oh how naughty Mrs Raymond is and how delicious was your tale of seduction. A thoroughly enjoyable read with hot erotica! More please  |
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