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| Date | 17-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Exchanging Valentines |
| Message | Pepper! This was so hot and sweet! I really liked it! |
| Date | 16-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Awake -- by Aahlu |
| Message | Aahlu, what can I say? You have an absoulutely magical way with your words. Your descriptive phrases unlock deep chasms of emotions within me, giving vibrant life to the most mundane of this world. You have a child-like quality of noticing details often missed by adults, but an adult's perspective of embellishment in your turns of phrase which would totally escape the curious child's expressiveness. The combination you forge within your imagination makes a fiery iridescence in your words. Thank you for all the fabulous imagery. I so enjoyed reading this piece! |
| Date | 16-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | She Wasn't Expecting All of That--by British Gent |
| Message | I liked the leisurely way your story unfolded, a bit at a time, without overwhelming your reader all at once. I felt a connection between the two friends, as if the entire scene which plays out was previously planned for maximal enjoyment. A well-conceived scene, your writing was executed with flair and detail. Definitely a very fulfilling experience in more ways than one! |
| Date | 16-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Mrs. Raymond by Ravenquill |
| Message | This story is really well written with a powerful plot. It plays on the older woman and her young lover theme. She is very seductive and a great teacher so it makes the story not only hot but also endearing. I loved this one. Every guy should get to learn what he is doing from such a woman! |
| Date | 16-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Exchanging Valentines ~ by peppercorn |
| Message | Pepper, you are an expert in seducing the reader from beginning to end with exactly the right diction to tell your tale. A hot piece of erotica for Valentines and flawless in every way. |
| Date | 15-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Deleted -- by Aahlu |
| Message | WOW! I am so, so impressed! This intriguing piece of meandering introspection is a superb juxtaposition of numerous and wonderful metaphoric images that explode with imagination. Your woven fabric of shimmering and almost magical words is mesmerizing to the reader, carrying him or her to the inner workings of another place, another time. It is beautifully rendered and most certainly enjoyed by THIS reader. Thank you so much. It is a great piece of writing. |
| Date | 15-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Time On My Hands ~ By Aahlu |
| Message | A unique, charming piece. Your characters are often left for the reader to shape them, your tone, I always sense a twinkle in your eye as if to say okay reader see what you make of this and your words are perfectly placed, each one of them there for a purpose. Wonderfully sublime! |
| Date | 15-Feb-2010 |
| Story | She Wasn't Expecting All Of That ~ By British Gent |
| Message | Straight into the erotica with this piece, well written, descriptive and certainly very hot stuff! |
| Date | 15-Feb-2010 |
| Story | Awake ~ by Aahlu |
| Message | Thank you for sharing this piece, a delightful awakening. |
| Date | 14-Feb-2010 |
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| Story | Time On My Hands -- by Aahlu |
| Message | Quirky and fascinating! I love the way your words meander around and then every now and then SPLAT themselves down on the page. You ramble thoughts, punctuating every now and then with a crisp image. The effect is fantastic! I so very much enjoyed reading this piece. Your style is unique and always fun to experience. Great job! |
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