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| Date | 03-Mar-2010 |
| Story | naughty christmas wish |
| Author | sweet p |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | sweet p your story took me away...as i listened to your voice i felt as though i was there...very romantic story...i would love a sleigh ride like that.....loved it!!! |
| Date | 02-Mar-2010 |
| Location |  |
| Story | The Reluctant Awakening |
| Author | Ravenquill |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | A beautiful story, beautifully written. Thank you. |
| Date | 01-Mar-2010 |
| Story | Jan's Story |
| Author | Wanda45 |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | You are a talented writer with excellent writing skills and the erotica was hot! A gread read and thank you for allowing R~SVP Erotica to publish your words! |
| Date | 01-Mar-2010 |
| Story | A Naughty Christmas Wish |
| Author | Sweet p |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | Sweet_p you could have read the white pages and I would have still given you 5! I totally love the audio with this story and you certainly made the reader engrossed in your words. I haven't a clue about correct spelling, repetition, bad grammar as I was compelled to just sit back and relish the story that was being told! Well done! |
| Date | 01-Mar-2010 |
| Story | Scrapyard |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 4 |
| Message | Great writing! |
| Date | 01-Mar-2010 |
| Story | One Of The Stories I Didn't Write |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 4 |
| Message | Typical Aahlu being unique in style and his approach in this piece is no different, amusing and original! |
| Date | 28-Feb-2010 |
| Location |  |
| Story | The Reluctant Awakening |
| Author | Ravenquill |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | Wow! I am glad I didnt know this was a story about 2 women as I probably would not have read it. I loved the pacing and how sensual it all was. Their moments together to tender and sweet. The whole story reads so true, like something you know that has happened. You are a great writer and paint wonderful images with your words. |
| Date | 21-Feb-2010 |
| Location | |
| Story | Deleted |
| Author | Aahlu |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | It takes a master wordsmith to weave a series of seeming ramblings into a tale, and this story could serve as a model for others attempting the same. I confess I read it twice before truly understanding, at least I think I now understand. Our minds walk different paths, my friend if I may call you such, and it took the second reading for me to adjust my way. Once that was done, your character's thoughts told me more about her than any description in detail might have. Such is the true art of the author, to tell without telling, to show without showing. Your words, sometimes sprinkled about without regard to the rules of proper usage, are both verse hiding in sentences as well as the way I would picture the thoughts of your character to tumble from her mind. Proper structure and punctuation could never convey the feelings and emotions I felt from this piece. Bravo to you for your use of the elipses, somtimes in multiples. I, too, love these little dots of the pregnant pause. An excellent piece once I allowed the meaning in the words to settle down and take root. I mean this not as a criticism, but as praise, for too often in today's world, we simply scan and expect to understand. Thank you for making me stop for a moment to feel. |
| Date | 21-Feb-2010 |
| Location | |
| Story | Happiness is a Househusband |
| Author | Giovanna Cafarelli |
| Rate 1~5 | 5 |
| Message | Well written story. Every woman's fantasy,domination and animal magnetism, a dream come true. |
| Date | 17-Feb-2010 |
| Location |  |
| Story | She wasn't expecting all of that. by British Gent |
| Message | A male fantasy brought luridly to life! Descriptive and a good example of this genre. I wish I could find a strap on that didn't taste of rubber or feel like a lump of wood in my mouth! Thank you British Gent! |
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