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| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | At the Beach House ~ by Aahlu |
| Message | Sensitive, emotive, descriptive, subtle. You succeed in bringing two characters to life and left me wanting to read more. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Lorraine's Coming Out ~ LaDramaPrincess |
| Message | A well written piece of erotica. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | At the Beach House - by Aahlu |
| Message | An incredibly erotic story that says so much without needing to tell much explicit detail. The emotion and passion between the characters comes through so beautifully, so tenderly. I could feel the bond between these two. The descriptive language is so marvelous and evocative and held me spellbound throughout your wonderful tale. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Gayla--partIII by phantomsilk |
| Message | A perfect ending for a perfect story. Tension builds as the story develops, carrying along the reader into new worlds and experiences. Surprises and twists are liberally sprinkled, enhancing the excitement the reader feels. You did an excellent job throughout and your story was extremely enjoyable. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
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| Story | Lorraine's ComingOut -- by LaDramaPrincess |
| Message | I loved that your characters are large, expressive women, who can enjoy their own beauty as well as that of each other. It is refreshing that you show women enjoying videos, also. You handle dialogue very well, and the interactions between the friends is natural and smooth. There is much emotion and tenderness between Cheyenne and Lorraine, and I enjoyed reading your story quite a bit. I look forward to many more stories you may share with us in the future. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | One Special Summer -- by Ravenquill |
| Message | A wonderful story showing an excellent ability for writing dialogue. Your words, like your characters, are gentle and knowing, with an easy-going flow that carries the reader from beginning to end. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | One Special Summer ~ by Ravenquill |
| Message | Thank you for sharing your story with us. Well written, a sensitive and endearing piece I hope we can read some more of your work. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | The Prize ~ by DsesertWolfAZ |
| Message | Well written and hot erotica. |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Islands In The Stream ~ by Aahlu |
| Message | Aahlu I felt as if I was the grey gull in your story looking down mesmerised at the tale as it unfolded, captivated by your words, engrossed in your descriptive language wondering where your mind was going to take us and enjoying the journey from beginning to end. You did not fail to please me. I smiled, I re read your words, I sat in surprise. A masterpiece that held my attention throughout. Bravo! |
| Date | 18-Jan-2010 |
| Story | Happiness is a Househusband ~ by GICwrites |
| Message | A well written story with a beginning middle and an end which I enjoy as oppose to throwing a piece of erotica on to a page. Very hot erotica, I hope you will pleasure us with more of your flawless writing. |
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