Message | (Feud90a) Great story, I LOVED the chapter! I love the cliffhangers! The amount of character development in your shit is amazing, and the culture development, lore, etc, but I'm sure you know that so I'll stop gushing!... And I'm going to put the drunk person trying to walk smiley on here, there's nowhere to appropriately use it, but that's certainly not going to stop me! (you know, it looks a hell of a lot like me last weekend, which makes it slightly less amusing and more like something I intend to avoid in the future... at least in areas with lots stairs... for a couple weeks... or at least until tomorrow... maybe.) Guilt and abstinence aren't really my forte, but I do try to pretend. Oh my there's also a smiley being shot with an arrow! Maybe that's supposed to be smoke going up, but it looks more like blood raining down in my generally foolish opinion, so without further ado, darthead! ...I bet they know each other! and tomorrow darthead will blame stumbly and stumbly will first deny everything and then say darthead told him to throw the stupid dart and shouldn't complain so much because it hurts stumbly's head dammit. And then dart head will say "YOUR fucking head? At which point he will promptly expire after having realized that (A) smiley blood (apparently) does not clot and (B) you can't hold all that much of it when you don't have a body (or your body is a stick) OH! btw! I loved the odd words I don't know in previous chapters! |